Showing posts with label Fiction Friday. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Fiction Friday. Show all posts

Friday, April 19, 2013

More Or Less A Man


Preston Davis had just returned home from the war.  He wasn't the man he was four years ago.  He had been a well built, healthy young man.  Life couldn't have been better for him if he had designed it himself.  Athletics had always been a part of his life.  From youth football through college bowl games.  He had played them all.  After graduation he had accepted a position as football coach from his high school Alma mater.  The team had gone to state his first year of coaching, making him a very popular coach.  They didn't win, but he had been so proud of his team for making it to the finals.  His bright smile, positive attitude, and ability to make others feel comfortable made him easily accepted by the townspeople. 

Now he was a double amputee lying in a hospital bed with no future plans, thanks to the IED hit the humvee he was driving.  On top of the physical pain was the emotional agony.  He had been the only survivor in the humvee, although there were days he questioned the term survivor.   As far as he was concerned, his life was over.  Who would hire a coach that couldn't even walk, let alone demonstrate the plays to the team? 

Heather Allen had been a senior the year Preston was hired.  She had been dating the quarterback and had gone to every game.  If it was an away game, Coach Davis allowed her follow the bus home for safety.  Sometimes she stopped at a restaurant with the team on the way home.  There she witnessed first-hand why the team respected and loved the new coach so much.

At the end of the school year, Heather had graduated and gone on to college.  She and the high school quarterback had dated through their first year in college and then gone their separate ways.

Now Heather was completing her Master's Degree in Physical Therapy.  She was enjoying the clinicals at the VA hospital.  The courage of the men she worked with was inspiring.  Some were bitter, but most were determined to not let their injuries keep them from living a full life.  Heather felt blessed to be learning from the doctors, nurses, and physical therapists in this hospital.  She was amazed at how much she learned from the patients.

Heather opened the new patient folder to learn the needs of the patient.  Pain gripped her heart when she recognized the name.  She remembered how vibrant he had been before he left.  Now she held in her hand a folder labeled DOUBLE AMPUTEE.

"Excuse me while I go study this folder."  Heather said to her mentor.  Then she went in search of a quiet place.  Just as she found the solitude her tears started flowing.  "Lord, I can't do this without you.  I can't remain professional or keep my emotions in check without your help.  Please give me the strength to do what you have called me to do.  Amen"

In short order, the tears stopped and Heather made her way down the hall to Preston's room.  Just before entering she sent up one more silent prayer.  Then she put on her best professional look and opened the door.  At the sight of Preston she weakened and immediately felt the strength of the Lord come over her.  Preston was at least 30lbs. lighter than when he was coaching, the color of ashes, and looked as weak as a small child.

Heather intentionally threw her shoulders back and walked with determination toward his bed.  "Hi Coach Davis.  Do you remember me?  I dated Chip Reynolds in high school."

"Yes, I remember you.  What are you doing here?"
"I am completing my degree in physical therapy and this is where I do my clinicals.  I'm going to be your PT for a few days."
"I really don't feel like doing any work today."
"Oh but you will when I am finished.  You will feel like a new man."
"I don't feel like a man at all."  She heard him say under his breath.
Heather chose to ignore the remark.  "Let's start with the arms."
"My arms?  There's nothing wrong with my arms."
"I know, but you are not exercising like you once were.  So let's work them a while."  Heather instructed him on how to stretch his arms.  It didn't take long for him to begin to tire.  "Now let's work your legs for just a minute.  Then you can stretch while I'm not here."
"I really don't want to stretch right now."
"Now you are a coach.  What would you tell one of your players who told you he didn't feel like running plays today?"
"I don't believe that I can say that in front of you."
"I'm not surprised.  You were tough on your guys, weren't you?"
"Yes and it got us to the playoffs."
"It sure did.  I've never seen Chip so happy."
"He was a good quarterback.  What's he doing now?  Are you two still dating?"
"No we dated for a while after high school, but then we went our separate ways.  He went east to a college and I stayed here so it was hard to communicate.  We're still friends, but no dating.  He is still in college majoring in chemistry."
"Oh wow, that's good."
"Yeah, yeah, yeah.  You've distracted me long enough.  Now start stretching those legs."
"You mean these nubs?"
"They are not nubs."
"Yes they are."
"Okay, temporary nubs."
Preston stretched each of his nubs out twice and then informed Heather that he could not do it again.  Frustrated, Heather left his room.

She kept picturing Chip on that football field in 99 degree weather, sweating, bruised, and dirty.  He wanted to quit but Coach Davis kept pushing him.  Sometimes Heather thought Chip was going to pass out, but he kept going because of Coach Davis.  Now Coach Davis needed a coach.
Heather went home and considered how to motivate Coach Davis.  She knew that every patient needed a goal to work toward.  What would Coach Davis set his sights on? She thought.  Lord, please give me some inspiration on how I can motivate Coach Davis.  Amen.
The next morning Heather made a point of focusing on each patient.  She wanted to complete her work quickly and efficiently.  She planned to spend quality time with Coach Davis in the afternoon. 
Heather walked into Coach Davis’ hospital room with much more confidence than she felt.  “Well Coach, how are you feeling today?”
“Like I got hit by an IED.”
“Oh, cracking jokes, huh?  You must be feeling better.”
Coach Davis didn’t smile and Heather recoiled at the change in what was once a sunny disposition.  She kept smiling and pretending that she was in complete control of her emotions.  “Aren’t you an athlete?”
“Yes, why?”
“What is the difference in a great athlete and a mediocre athlete?”
“A great athlete never gives up.”  He answered with a snide voice.”
“I thought you’d say something like that.  Today we are going to play ball.” Heather said as she pulled a small ball from her bag.
“You don’t have to play catch with me like I’m a little kid, you know?”
“Oh we aren’t playing catch.”
“Then what are we going to play?”
“Kickball.”
“Hey Einstein, I’m lying in a hospital bed while both of my legs are in another country.  It might be a while before I can kick anything.”
“Then you’ll just have to use what you have in this country.”
“Well maybe we should change the name of the game to nub ball.”  The sarcasm in his voice was far different than the lilt that used to lift the spirits of his students.
Heather pulled back the sheets, exposing his bandaged legs.  She was careful to not let her feelings show in her face.  Then she adjusted the bed so that Preston was in a half sitting position. 
“Ready?  Let’s play.”  She said as she held the ball about twelve inches above his wounded legs and gently dropped it.  Preston made no effort to raise his legs to kick.  Frustrated but determined, Heather picked up the ball and tried again.  And again she received the same response—or lack of.
End of Part I
Part 2 coming next week.



Friday, April 12, 2013

Fiction Friday--Topsy Turvy Ministry

Fiction Friday--Topsy Turvy Ministry

Ann and her husband, Ralph were faithful in their home church.  They both served on several committees and were a reliable resource for the pastor  and congregation.  In turn, Ralph and Ann enjoyed serving their Lord and congregation.
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Ann was mopping the kitchen floor when the telephone rang.  She was not surprised to hear her pastor's voice on the other end.  

"Good morning, Ann."  Pastor Peachy said,
"Good morning, Pastor.  What can I do for you today?"

"Mr. Paulson passed away last night.  He had been ill for several months.  I need you to take some food over to the family.  The address is  675 N. Point St."

"Alright, I'll call some of the ladies in the church to bring food.  They will bring it to the church and I'll pick it up and deliver it to the house."

"That's great.  I'll leave the door to the kitchen open and they can put the food in there.  Thanks for helping, Ann.  I really appreciate you."

"I enjoy it, Pastor.  I'll be at the church in a couple of hours to gather the food."

Immediately Ann began calling the food committee members.  In a very short period of time, she had contacted enough ladies to present the family with an adequate meal.  Then she began cooking the dish she planned to take.  Two hours later she arrived at the church kitchen and was pleased to see the variety of dishes brought by the committee.  

As usual her friend, Brenda was waiting in the kitchen to help her.  They quickly loaded the food in the back of Ann's SUV.  As Ann drove off, she handed the address to Brenda who was in the passenger seat.  Although, neither had ever been there, it took very few minutes to arrive at the family's home. 

There was no answer when Ann knocked on the front door.  Brenda tried the door knob and discovered it not locked.  Quietly she opened the door and called out.  "Hello?  Is anybody home?"  They heard no answer.  

"What do we do?"  Ann asked.

"Well, they knew we were coming, so let's go in and set up the food."

They entered the home and quickly found the kitchen.  They weren't surprised to see the kitchen in disarray and decided to clean it before bringing the food in from the car.  It didn't take long for the two ladies to make the kitchen spic and span.  They began unloading the SUV.  Cold food was stored in the refrigerator and hot food was placed on the stove.  

"That should help them a lot."  Brenda stated.
"I think so."  Ann replied.  "Let's go home."

Ann had just settled down in her recliner when the phone rang.  "Hello?"
"Ann, that was the wrong address.  The family lives at 675 S. Point."  Brenda said excitedly.
"Oh, no.  I'll be at your house in five minutes."

Brenda and Ann drove as quickly as allowable--or semi-allowable back to the house on N. Point.  As Ann backed into the driveway, Brenda observed that nothing had changed since they left.  "No one is here."

"Oh, good.  I didn't know how I was going to take all this food away from them.  Let's hurry and get out of here before they return."  Ann said as she literally threw food into the back of the SUV.  In short order, the food was loaded and they drove across the highway to the same address on S. Point.  

As with the wrong house, no one was home.  This time Ann and Brenda placed the food on the counter-top so the family could served themselves quickly.  

Just as they finished, Brenda said, "I don't remember that angel food cake at the church."

"Oh NO!  I am not going back to that house.  I've already been there twice today.  It's a wonder someone didn't call the police on me.  I am not taking that cake back."

An embarrassed Ann and an amused Brenda drove home debating whether they should ever admit their mistake.